I put it in
And screamed of joy
The day was finally here
The night was cold
My breath floated into the darkness
Remorse was all that was left
It lit up like the sun
What a striking spectacle
I love the shapes of trees
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very cool Q but can you deconstruct it for us?
I believe it is iambic pentameter. Why are you questioning me CyberD.
I'm not questioning you, I'm simply expressing deeper interest by opening a dialogue with you about your creative work.
hehe...deeper
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